Winter has arrived.
My hands and feet are
sore and numb from the
blistering winds.
No angels in sight;
the snow is too thick, and the
cold too brutal for
outdoor fun.
I put on several coats to keep
warm;
the gales have put out the
fire. I need
more layers to keep
warm-
i've neither coal nor
firewood left.
I see someone from a distance-
His red velvet coat is a stark
contrast to
the unblemished snow. He
offers firewood in exchange for
one coat.
I wonder if
such a trade is worth my while:
What if I discover the
inferiority of the firewood after
stripping a
layer off myself
What if he withdraws his
offer upon receiving
my coat?
(for there is never a moment of singular fair and precise exchange).
I forget this.
What happens when the firewood burns out as
always
they do?
My coat is for life.
Layers work best.
The exchange will not do.
Though so many times an unfair bargain may prove tempting:
Fire does not bring just
warmth but light
At night.
Will the moon not suffice?
Will the stars not shine?
More than enough,
Though this season be rough.
My hands and feet are
sore and numb from the
blistering winds.
No angels in sight;
the snow is too thick, and the
cold too brutal for
outdoor fun.
I put on several coats to keep
warm;
the gales have put out the
fire. I need
more layers to keep
warm-
i've neither coal nor
firewood left.
I see someone from a distance-
His red velvet coat is a stark
contrast to
the unblemished snow. He
offers firewood in exchange for
one coat.
I wonder if
such a trade is worth my while:
What if I discover the
inferiority of the firewood after
stripping a
layer off myself
What if he withdraws his
offer upon receiving
my coat?
(for there is never a moment of singular fair and precise exchange).
I forget this.
What happens when the firewood burns out as
always
they do?
My coat is for life.
Layers work best.
The exchange will not do.
Though so many times an unfair bargain may prove tempting:
Fire does not bring just
warmth but light
At night.
Will the moon not suffice?
Will the stars not shine?
More than enough,
Though this season be rough.

6 Comments:
Nice! Indeed can you ever receive as much as you receive, no more and no less?
Nice! Indeed can you ever receive as much as you receive, no more and no less?
ah doofus i mean receive as much as you give. i think i subconsciously only want to receive from now on ha.
Wow. It does make quite a lot of sense. Wow. And yeah, firewood burns out. Will my coat wear out faster? Am I willing to exchange my coat for a brief moment of comfort?
*chuckle* if it's all the same to you, i'd like my simpler 'lets eat beef hor fun' tania back.
this post was way too deep for me.
you wrote this yourself? wow.
liked the part about there never being a moment of fair and precise exchange. :)
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